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authorScott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>2014-07-31 09:23:00 +0300
committerRichard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>2014-08-02 10:00:25 +0100
commit3be4af9cf3a517183aafd8db1ab4b568679baa93 (patch)
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downloadopenembedded-core-contrib-3be4af9cf3a517183aafd8db1ab4b568679baa93.tar.gz
dev-manual: Applied review edits to the 'wic' section.
I made some small edits to the section based on Tom Zanussi's review. (From yocto-docs rev: 560ea7b0eb131e59b190a34cadbe77729e76d61c) Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com> Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
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-rw-r--r--documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml17
1 files changed, 9 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
index 01ee2da8d0..d235a99f91 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
@@ -3560,12 +3560,12 @@
have already created an image using the
Openembedded build system (e.g.
<filename>core-image-minimal</filename>).
- It might seem redundant to generate an image in
+ While it might seem redundant to generate an image in
order to create an image using
- <filename>wic</filename>, but in the current
- version <filename>wic</filename>, the artifacts
- are needed in the form generated by the build
- system.</para></listitem>
+ <filename>wic</filename>, the current version of
+ <filename>wic</filename> requires the artifacts
+ in the form generated by the build system.
+ </para></listitem>
<listitem><para>
You must have sourced one of the build environment
setup scripts (i.e.
@@ -4182,7 +4182,8 @@
The code that then needs to call the plugin methods uses
<filename>plugin.get_source_plugin_methods()</filename>
to find the method or methods needed by the call.
- Location is accomplished by filling up a dict with keys
+ Retrieval of those methods is accomplished is accomplished
+ by filling up a dict with keys
containing the method names of interest.
On success, these will be filled in with the actual
methods.
@@ -4205,7 +4206,7 @@
The following is a list of the commands, their syntax,
and meanings.
The commands are based on the Fedora
- kickstart documentation but with modifications to
+ kickstart versions but with modifications to
reflect <filename>wic</filename> capabilities.
You can see the original documentation for those commands
at the following links:
@@ -4356,7 +4357,7 @@
means of modifying bootloader configuration.
</para>
<para>
- Future updates will implement more options.
+ Future updates will implement more commands and options.
If you use anything that is not specifically
supported, results can be unpredictable.</para>
</note>